- Excellent analysis of Maltese Falcon
- Storyboard could do with some more images and descriptions in terms of framing/camera movement
- You did well to incorporate your initial opening logo video but we need designs, drafts to determine where this idea stemmed from
- The machine studios image is far too big and needs to be corrected for homework
You still have elements missing from your previous feedback: 08/12/15
- Mission:
- Is seems that significant components of textual analysis are missing in the form of the following;
- What we now need to see is your evidence for designing and creating studio logo's and your understanding of the correct conventional title orders as studied in class.
- Some images are also required to enhance the look and design your blog. 'Se7en' textual analysis
- Also in addition we need ypur BFI data analysis
- Mind mapping of initial ideas etc
• Planning
and research evidence may be partially incomplete;
• There
is basic research into similar products and a potential target
audience;
• There
is basic organisation of actors, locations, costumes or props;
• There
is basic work on shotlists, layouts, drafting, scripting or
storyboarding;
• There
is a basic level of care in the presentation of the research and
planning;
• Time
management may not be good.
MINIMAL (L1)
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BASIC (L2)
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PROFICIENT (L3)
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EXCELLENT (L4)
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TOTAL
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1.RESEARCH & PLANNING
[20]
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0-7
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8-11
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12-15
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16-20
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8/20
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2. CONSTRUCTION – MAIN TASK
[40]
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0-23
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24-35
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36-47
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48-60
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3.EVALUATION
[20]
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0-7
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8-11
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12-15
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16-20
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TOTAL GRADE FOR
FOUNDATION PORTFOLIO [100]
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/100
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Minus -39 = U
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40-49 = E
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50-59 = D
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60-69 = C
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70-79 = B
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80-100 = A
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